verbal violence..where were the punches?? didnt see any...any wayz u had a pretty weak verse..seems more like u was just rhyming about urself rather than battling..with like a few references 2ward ur opponent, structure was wack..was all over the place..rhyme scheme was also weak..but u did have some decent vocab..sumtimes

b.x.p..was an ok verse nout special..but at least u threw punches unlike verbal..structure was tight and so was your flow..u had some played concepts..if u use more imagintive concepts this well defiently elevate you!..coz u have everything else down!

v. b.x.p..better all round verse and punches