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Old 07-09-04, 10:59 AM   #9
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
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From: Sa-Town
IP:

first props to both

Hoops- good drop..not very original though cuz when people think of misunderstood
its usually the family and school shit they come up with first but your flow
was nice and you had some emotion up in there...stuc was good wasnt
all tipsy i like your verse but not an oringal concept...and your vocab was ok

R- i felt this verse..and i like the vocab you dropped in it too...it gave it more meaning
your struc was nice and it flowed nicely,you also had deeper emotion in your verse

nice drop by both

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