shit
LI: your shit was good but you lacked vocab and your flow was off at times and the ending ruined the whole thing cause it didnt really make sense

I know if it happened again.. this time I would save you…


^ how if he's dead...LOL
but anywayz your imagenery was pretty good 7.5/10
your vocab lacked 5/10
your structure was alright 6.5/10
your wordplay was pretty bad too 6.5/10
your multi's..didnt really see any 5/10
meta's none were used 0/10

Deleon: your verse had much better vocab and wording...and structure was better
imagenry it was decent 7.5/10
your wordplay was good 8/10
multi's were good 7.5/10
meta's i didnt really see any 0/10
structure was good 8/10
vocab was excellent 8.5/10

overall: vote: Deleon

that was real hot

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