Lethal took this with better punches, better wordplay, and better struc. I wasn't really feelin ya struc drastic, it kinda halted your flow.

Drastic- You had some decent attempted punches, but most of them were just plain statements. Like the line about cuttin him in front of a mirror, and the 9/11 line, i wasn't really feelin those. As i said your struc was simple, and it took away from your flow. Your punches were kinda played too, like the skywalker line. Not a bad verse tho, just need some work.

Lethal- Nice verse, you had some hard hitting punches, and you had some nice personals about his sig and his name and stuff, which was pretty creative. You don't need that many astericks tho, you shouldn't have to explain every other line in your verse. I thought you had better flow tho, and you had better wordplay than he did, and you also had better punches, so you get my vote.