Kill, ya flow was there, but your punches weren't.. Might also consider workin' on ya structure, your bars seem a bit on the short side.. Keep workin' at it dawg.. it comes with time..

Blimp, you know you took this, I don't even really have to explain.. All out had a better verse.. Much respect to both cats though..

v/Blimp

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Also, could I get a vote or 2? Links in the sig.. thanks folks..