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Old 07-09-04, 02:44 PM   #11
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Mad Dog

I got ill intentionz on my mind time 2 make fools out these guys its intended/
I.I aka these dicks demented beaten w/lil hammers now they heads dented/
Ugh...Seems Like A Filler
Ur attitude stinks boi u like 14 deserved to get spanked who the hell are you?/
This cat thinks he's amazing at rappin...yet he's losin to hoops/
Diss To Hoops..But Not Really To Poison
And whats wit ur fav word playboi this aint Hugh Hefners sex pad/
Playgirls that way -> go find urself a man to get ur shit jacked/
Aight...Aight Punch
U talk about it a lot...askin personal questions not always a safe bet/
Braggin about him losin his virginity but i doubt he's had sex yet/
Fake Personal/Punch...Assumtion..Nice If It Was True
Intentionz aint as good as DARK KNIGHTS all they got was bad times/
Come to mention ur destined to see WHITE LIGHT this is ur R.I.P rhyme/
Nice..Prolly Best Line...Nice Meta
Like TonySelf said this is a this is a dangerous crew/
But we never complimented...dangerous HA YOU???/
Off Beat..Coula Been Betta
U bitches is like pin pricks...u dont hurt at all/
U fight like you live backwards...u walk then crawl/
Decent
So i guess this is the last bar heres a word of warning/
Dont look at the poll results...coz zero's watch u'll be scoring/
Aight Closer

Alright Battle Verse..Coulda Been Better With Flow and Word Ususage. Nice Drop.

6/10

Poison

Who let this dirty mut off tha leash to roam tha streets...
fuck animal control poison puttin this mad dog to sleep...
Wack
u aint even a contenda, so how u suppose to compete...
u jus a beginna, an ya brain will neva be close to complete...
Wack
otha peoples flows get sucked up by u, like blood to a leech...
puppy ya got mo wack shit, than there is sand on a beach...
Wack
kid ya weak, im bout to add a loss to ya losin streak...
ya kiddin me, u not gon win, stop amusin me...
Best Line But Still Weak
im abusin u, like a girl wit low-self esteem, dawg im usin u...
only fa practice fool, an id be damed if i lose to you...
Filler---Wack
i dunno who hyped you up but chu not shit...
thats jus a common cold homie you not sick...
Played..But Aight
tha only way u coulda been tight is if u were a virgin chic...
but chu not, so u stink mo than birds an shit...
LOL..Fuckin Wack Again
ya late, erything u write i already heard of it...
ya fake, u jus take tha lyrics an re-word it a bit...
Aight...Reworded Woulda Sounded Better
an i aint gay dawg, so don get tha shit twisted...
jus ask ya moms, cuz she love doin them freaky positions..
Wack
man u need to get cha head right, u da one wit bad times...
you rappin on a website, bitch u aint destined to rhyme
Well Personal but Everyone Uses It

LOL...Please Elevate and Then Come Back and Make Up A Rhyme With SuM Punches and Creativitie.

2/10

Vote-Mad Dog

~R~