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Old 07-09-04, 03:00 PM   #16
Magic5
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Datruth29
structure is good...flow is on target...no metas...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

EyeDentdy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...that newbish...but anywho...structure is good...flow falls off a lil cause u had a few stretched lines...no metas...wordplay is decent...a few of ur punches connected...ok personals...

Overall
EyeDentdy had more personals...neither had metas...both had a good structure...Datruth29 had the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...DaTruth29 gets my vote...

VOTE - DATRUTH29

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...