-Strype-
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay is pretty good...most of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

verbal violence
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure is pretty wack...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretched lines...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had metas...-Strype- had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...-Strype- gets my vote...

VOTE - -STRYPE-

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...