verbal violence
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines....other then that...structure sucked...most of ur lines were mad stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

B.X.P.
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
both had a few metas...B.X.P. had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...B.X.P. gets my vote...

VOTE - B.X.P.

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...