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Old 07-09-04, 03:22 PM   #3
Magic5
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HMP
structure is good...flow is on target...u had tight metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...at times it seemed as if all u were doin was droppin metas...like ur opener...that shit didnt connect at all...no good personals...quotes r played, and u didnt even use that quote in a way itd connect him...

mistah_tate
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure sucked...it seemed like ur lines were goin everywhere...flow fell off cause of the structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
HMP had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more metas...neither had good personals...mistah_tate had better better wordplay and more connecting punches...and despite HMP having taken 3 of the categories, to mistah_tate's 2...mistah_tate gets my vote...and heres y...structure is not very important in battles...and metas just add to the flow...and to me, wordplay and punches r more important categories to have then structure, flow, and metas...so in that sense...mistah_tate gets my vote...close battle though...

VOTE - MISTAH_TATE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...