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Old 07-09-04, 04:18 PM   #10
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flex...your verse was all wordplay...it was ok but that doesnt win battles....punches and personals wins battles..you had a couple that were decent...but it wasnt enough to win...your flow was on point...and structure was good....but you were missin personals...keep elavatin...

mimesis...good drop....your punches hit hard....flow was on point and structure was good...your opener and closer ripped him.....keep it up

vote/mimesis
....for overall better verse......