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IP:
Mixtape
structure is good...flow is on target...u had no metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Joval8
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure is ok...flow falls off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
Joval8 had more metas...neither had good personals...Mixtape had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mixtape gets my vote...
VOTE - MIXTAPE
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...
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