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-Youngbleek.
yea nigga i'll pop 5 in yo shoulder and u'll b hittin da shake/
nigga u cake/
I'll leave u out bloody in da lake/
straight flow, no wordplay, too simple of a diss
getting wet by da clips and shit when i spit/
cuz niggaz know bleek a pull a hit real quick/
im too quick/
im too slick/
i push coke from east to west u'll think im pushin bricks/
coo flow, no wordplay, not really a diss
Da truth u aint speaking tha truth wat u speakin is bogus/
before u spit wat u need to do is focus/
average flow, no wordplay, weak/simplistic diss
I spit bars nigga it dont matter/
put holes thru yo diaphram and make it shatter ure blatter/
nigga dont chatter/
coo flow, no wordplay, weak/simplistic diss
be about it/
u beating me man playa i doubt it/
tha ryhmes that i spit/
man it wasn't writ/
i think u a pussy u coodnt role wit my clit
coo flow, weak wordplay, played out diss
-Datruth29.
I sick these damn whores, slap this youngter n ask him what he Raps For
Coz man, this dude sells more "bullshit" than fertilizer in Plant Stores
coo flow, coo wordplay, aight diss
This is my kingdom, be glad that it's something you can Serve In
coz you're verbless, couldn't put a thought together if you wrote it in Cursive
coo multi with the flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
Shit, you can't even win a "battle" with a Roman Battalion
it's like i'm a Unicorn, you're a 2nd generation, steamed out Stallion
average flow, forced wordplay, weak diss
Why do I even Rhyme Wit U, u don't even know y the Sky Is Blue
Bitch can't you tell, I'm The truth, look at yo watch, it's Time To Lose
good flow with the multi, forced wordplay, played diss
I'll never be as blind as U, I couldn't lose to you if that's what I Treid To Do
Buy a Clue, I straight up conquered you..... Like America after 1492
good flow, coo wordplay, straight punch
You're whack, and battling me is stupid, so Why Do It
I stay on wax, you shouldn't even be on a "track", unless your Tied To It
good flow and multi, decent wordplay, decent punch
Your toughest challenge, I can do while Takin A Shit, without Energy
I Lyrically Rip MC's that steal their names from Memphis "Bleek"
You just Little Geek, your mouth's dry, how could you of Spit wit Me
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak diss
Overall, Truth got this. He had punches, the flow and the wordplay. Work on your creativity a little more & wording. You've elivated a lot since I first saw you round here. Bleek, work on forming punchlines, a more complex flow, add some wordplay and creativity. Keep at it mayne.
Vote - Datruth29.
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