opener AKA
Personals Unfortunate
Multies Nobody
Vocab AKA
Wordplay Unfortunate
Structure Nobody
Punches Aka
Closer Aka

Aka- need to work on structure and spelling so us readers can understand more.
I see potential...you need stronger punches and reword them to get the full
effect. no multies that I saw. also come with some personals...some good
ones. An okay verse

Unfortunate- you need to work on structure as well. I noticed that you tried to
come with punches I mean alot of them...but some didnt make sense
do you feel me I think a lot of others will think same. no multies. You
You were more on the personal side I thought ....

V/Aka close battle though

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