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Old 07-09-04, 08:37 PM   #13
.gunit101
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Wow, I really expected a lot more from this.....

Mr Goodbar was OK. He had a few OK punches but most were ehh. He flowed OK but was off in a few spots. He had a little bit of wit behind his punches but it was minimal. Overall, like I said, it was an OK verse...

BigChase was pretty much horrible. He didn't even rhyme in his opener, let alone most of his bars. He needs to learn that you can't type five lines and call it one bar. Wit wasn't apparent. Overall, his verse just lacked everything. You need to just start practicing on your structure. Learn how to make your lines even, and for gods sake, learn how to rhyme....

Vote - Mr Goodbar