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Custom Vet
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I can't vote on this because Big's in my crew, but I can leave an opinion.
Flow- Mr. Goodbar. His lines may have been shorter, but line length doesn't matter. You've got make sure that when people read your verse, they can breeze through it easily and with comprehention. Big, your verse was rather stretched. Work on your sylables, it'll help the flow.
Structure- Tied. Nothing flawd with the way y'all wrote yah verses.
Punches- Big, I must say that although Mr.Goodbar was funny, you hit harder. Even though some of the shit you wrote was play'd, I saw some originality there.
Personals- Big, I noted the way you used Goodbar's pic in your verse. Nice one.
Multies and Wordplay- Both go the Mr.Goodbar, he had some nice ones in his verse.
Funny- Definitly went to Mr.Goodbar. Your sig just cracks me up man. Big, you can include hard punches as well as funny ones brah, but I didn't see any this time around.
Overall vote... I'll keep that to myself. But this was a tight battle, I'm out.
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