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Old 07-09-04, 09:17 PM   #17
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Yeah, this one was pretty much one sided....

Datruth came with some OK punches and a few even stuck. None really stood out and a few were pretty played, but I guess it was an OK verse. His flow wasn't bad and he had a little wit behind his punches. Overall, I guess it was a solid verse. You need to elevate a little though. Come up with some original concepts...

Eyedentity was pretty much wack in this one. He had a hard time rhyming and his flow was off in a few places. He didn't really have any wit behind his punches and he pretty much sucked. I think you need to start over and learn how to rhyme and structure your verse....

Vote - Datruth