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Middle Weight
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IP:
 hate to admit it, but strype you got potential. you easily won, but ill break down your verse so you can elevate.
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Look, we all know you're a newbie.. so Boastin' is Worthless
Check his battle with Bleek, this kid Posted TWO Verses
nice personal, good rhyme, good structure. could have hit harder if he had lost though
I treat you like Garbage.. so you start to Feed us Trash?
when this shit's over, none of the voters'll "C" your "ass"
garbage/trash was blah. c your ass was ok... but you could have done better with the concept.
challenge a vet? you're weak.. you might as well Ball & Pout
you knew you'd just get beat.. why the fuck did you Call Me Out?
eh... this is done pretty often. good rhyming though.
I'm sick and tired of you scrubs thinkin' you can Spit Game
Here, borrow my Washing Machine.. clean off those Shit Stains
this was not very good.
fuckin pussy.. you rap softer than the Blankets on my Bed
Learned so much from this loss that u're.. Thankin' me Instead
[b]not bad as a closer... the rap/wrap thing is played a bit but you added the blankets thing... so kinda original
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basically just work on your wordplay and youll be set. and less played. |