goodbar...you took this...you had punches that were pretty good...structure and flow was aight...you had multis and and good wordplay...keep it up...

bigchase..i wasnt feeling your verse at all...it was like all sex...be more personal..
..diss on his name..or somethin...structure and flow was off because of the stretched
lines...it would have been ok if you had metas...but you didnt...

v/goodbar
harder punches