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Old 07-09-04, 11:20 PM   #11
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

so u tha street soulja and u three and zero,
u might be tomorrows warrior but aint nobodys hero/
notta good opener..type weak 5/10
u big so why u always gettin Chased
,and get tied in a knot like ur shoelace/
whack punchline..so simplistic 4/10
this ur wat 4th battle,
and imma beat u like ur granny does wit her paddle/
lmao..type weak AGAIN..whack 4/10
am i gettin 2 personal please dont cry,
now u tell ur friends ur first lost was from a nigga named LilChi/
whack..just exploitin ur self..whack 5/10
and u say i already lost tha race,bigchase,
take tha mic im done wit u git out my face
you said Bigchase twice in two lines..bad closer 4/10

22/50

This newb is 0-4 and hes bagging on my record due to jealousy
Hes a virgin but he attempts to cover it up, claiming celebacy..
feedin off..i dont like when ppl do dat..so u lose points 4 dat 5/10
Its pointless battlin his rhymes are worse than steppin in shit
Maybe hell elevate if his rhymes dont rupture eardrums of critics..
ehh..iight..waitin for a nice punch..6/10
Okay kid your flow is off, theres no structure, vocabulary is simple
Dont lie in your rhymes cuz everyone knows the only thing you pop is pimples..
SIMPLISTIC punchline..type weak 4/10
And neva hate on my crew yours was disbanded due to bein wack
You make Chitown look so bad I almost took Kayne West back..
heh..nice personal..good..7/10
This one sided battle aint nothin special but neither is lilchiofhatchi
One word of advice change your name cuz WHAT THE FUCK DOES THAT MEAN..
lol..whack personal..whack ender..type whack 5/10

27/50

Vote-Big Chase
Can yall vote hoenstly and professionally on my current battle, please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085
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