triple n:

i was really feeling your verse tons of emotion and depth it came together really good and the flow was consistent...i liked how you grabbed a hold of the topic and explained it thoroughly...and your point of view on your topic made it just that much hotter...good wordplay and a couple good multies...structure was choppy in some places besides that it was a pretty solid piece

overall: 9/10

shadow:
your verse was also really good seen a couple good multies and the wordplay was good you had a good way with words and your flow was more consistent than triple n's so was your structure...the only thing that wasnt really there was imagery emotion depth 3 important characteristics of a topical battle...i think your verse could have been better if u applied those techniques into your verse other than that your piece was really good

overall :7.5/10

vote: triple N

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