mixtape:

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
^^1st line good multi 2nd line weak 5/10
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
^^it was a good set up but it ended up weak 3/10
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
^^good try at multies but they werent hott 6/10
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
^^bar was foced and decent not a hott punch and stretched 4/10
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
^^your best bar and it was filler 7/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

calamity:


Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
^^2 good personals hottest bar in battle 9/10
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
^^lol good meta 7/10
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
^^kinda weak 4/10
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
^^good personal weak punch 5/10

overall : 25/40 (63%)

vote: calamity

mixtape i have seen you come way hotter your verse was your worst ever...dont start getting weak use better punches more personals and multies better wordplay and fix your structure a lil

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