Thread: .gunit Vs eB
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Old 07-10-04, 12:25 AM   #15
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-Gunit101.
eB, hmmm.....makes me wonder what kinda bitch e B
Needs to elevate...looking up's only time he'd see me
coo multi with the flow, aight wordplay, played out punch
Think you ballin? I'm strong in the post...nerd, he heard me
Dragging him through the mud...so he's rockin a Dirrty Jersey
coo multi, aight wordplay, aight punch
This game's over bitch....easily I had him bleed by the pen
Used to losing, so for a pep talk he sigged..."please try again"
aight multi, aight wordplay, sig disses are played out
Get off my nuts faggot.....that's what he seems to be after
Take a look at his name and you'll see that he'll 'Be' backwards
aight multi, aight wordplay, played out nameplay
So humble, he bows down.....leaving this dude's mark when
He comes to polish me off.....and leave my shoes sparklin
straight multi, coo wordplay, coo punch


-Eb.
You Think You’re A Spittin’ Cock Sucker?
Your Just A Cocky Ass Mutherfucker.
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss
HaHa And That’s All You Got?
Better Turn Up The AC Cause I’m Too Damn HOTT.
average flow, straight wordplay, not really a diss/punch
Your Probably As Ugly As You Sound.
Most Deffinetly The Gayest Cat Around
coo flow with the multi, aight wordplay, played out diss
With Yo Boyfriends Is When You Get On The Ground.
That’s Why When You Wip It Out Your Dicks Brown.
average flow, straight wordplay, aight punch
What’s Your Record The Loses Must Be Accumulating?
The Way You Spit Is Just Straight Humiliating.
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
Ooo My First Battle Goin’ Down In History.
Glad It’s Over So I Can Celebrate My Victory.
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss


Overall, G got this. He was a little stronger with the punches and had a better flow. G, work on your wordplay, creativity, and wording some. Eb, work on your wittiness, wordplay, creativity, and consistency with flow. You're doin' aight for your first battle. Keep at it mayne.


Vote - Gunit101.