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Old 07-10-04, 12:28 AM   #14
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breakdown

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
damn that was a pretty hot opener
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
hot... but it could have been better toward the end ... but decent
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
lol...nice multies...
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
iight decent line... but the structure was off
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
pretty good closer.... but seen alot better from you but overall i think you took this

Calamity
Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
damn nice ass opener...
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
decent line
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
good personal but not really feelin it
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
weak closer...


structure:Calamity
punchlines:mix
personals:calamity
multies:mix
enjoy:both
flow:mix

overall vote mixtape but i very close battle
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