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Old 07-10-04, 12:28 AM   #27
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kingz & mad dog:

This tag battles gonn be 1 sided...me n Kingz gonn cause a catastrophe/
Sum'll say its PoEtIc JuStiCe...when we decease that bitch and Calamity/
^^hott opener good personal 7/10
I tell ya its an injustice how sum cat has a name like his life...
...mostly up and down/
Well the up's were when he was on his knees...
...rest of the time he was flat on the ground/
^^good meta decent punch 6/10
And hoops had a change of name now he's a Calamity like Jane*/
But it wont change ur style, forcin words like ur name'll hurt...
...so try not to strain/
^^1st line hott 2nd really weak 5/10
U guys are a pain claimin u hott headed...
...when u tagged 4 twice the beating/
How the hell can u fags be excited...
...most of the time u calmy seated/
^^LMAO hott punch 9/10
PoEtIc JuStIcE battlin aint ur best thing dawg stick to the topicals/
Only way ur poems be heart warming...
...is if they were produced in the tropicals/
^^good personal and punch 6/10
Calamity and PJ i enjoyed this battle but it should be a handicap/
Coz without ur crutches and wheelchairs...
...u aint nothing but keystylin crap/
^^ehhh decent closer not too hott 4/10

overall : 37/60

kings:

Don’t have a ‘cow…girl’…jus let me explain…
…ur a woman wanting to be a man…
your named after calamity jane!
^^would have been hott if mad dog didnt use it 2/10
Im here to regin…drench yo chances…ur here to lose
…yeh, your from a mic stand…
which you don’t know how to use!
^^lol funny punch 6/10
got back to hardwood...ya heard me?
...your a reject...
like a real 'throwback' jersey
^^weakest thing you have ever wrote 1/10
Hardwood will get capped…broken off at the stifle
…dog, the only respect you get…
is in your title!
^^lol that was hott tho 7/10
PJ

You a slag…d2r is the only thing you got to brag
… you cudnt fight yo way out of a box…
and I doubt a wet paper bag! (avatar)
^^that was a good prsonal and hott 8/10
yeh we cool…cos you’re a destined 2 rhymer
…you cudnt even get on a label…
if you were a clothing designer!
^^more fire 8/10
I will merk you like Mark Antony was by Augustus
…cos even judge…
cudnt do you poems justice!
^^decent punch 6/10
your over dog...and i aint even begun
...3 strikes and you out!...
cos i hit harder than a home run!
^^good meta bad closer 5/10

overall : 43/80

team overall : 80/140 (57%)

poeticjustice & calamity:

calamity:

they couldnt eat us with high merits,if i slapped them with birds of prey..
and i think the whole site agrees, when i say that these "words are gay"..
^^hott personal good punch fire opener 9/10
get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs..
how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong..
^^another hott personal staying consistent 8/10
d2r is overated,being wacks an overstatement,poetics only one respected..
funny thing is.you guys couldnt be deadly-ill even if i broke ya neck-kid..
^^hott shyt 7/10
dry on the mic, never heard them better than horrible,like silent audibles..
ya'll still stuck with text?i would have thought you'd moved to audio..
^^still staying consistent good bar 6/10
the fact is,my wackest lines is what they max is,deductable like taxes..
these two are like runnin retards,please point them to where the track-is..
^^hottest bar of the battle 10/10

overall : 41/60

poeticjustice:

mad dog...u aint a pedigree...background from the DARK KNIGHTS...
leader of our crew?...i think stevie wonder mustve bin judging that nite..
^^lmao hott bar good meta 8/10
u clearly below all our level..u cnt reach..we all on a higher shelf
he aint only gettin dissed by me..heres him gettin ripped by TONYSELF
^^good personal nice bar 7/10
done wit this joker,u rb`s biggest clown,a sad story of "lost but never-found"
this aint the place to drop "shit"..maybe u should go back to the dog-pound
^^good meta and name play 7/10

how bout u kingz?..the only royalty ever to serve under a crew...
should call u a queen..coz u seem to like mad-dog on top of u...
^^this was your hottest bar just fire without a doubt 10/10
hang on.... ima pull a little harder on this choke artists chain...
hve him chokin more times than an afghan when he givin false names..
^^lol good punch feeling this 8/10
took all ya nine lives,stamped u,hit u rite back..now u a certified wack-cat
you cnt stand tall...ur structures less solid than an M.FI. flat-pack...
^^decent closer coulda been hotter 5/10

overall : 45/60

team overall : 86/120 (72%)

vote: poeticjustice and calamity

str8 fire from you two structure was perfect flow was consistent hott personals and punches hott verses all the way through...as for kings and mad dog i think this is the weakest i have ever seen both of you...your verses werent that hott i expected more from you 2 upset win for PJ and calamity hott battle tho

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