trase: your verse had a couple things hotter than hoops which were: the imagery that was off the chain it was so real like i was the person doin the shottin that made your verse hott...the topic itself you worked better than hoops but i feel you fell off a couple times but stayed mostly consistent...vocabulary was bad tho and so was the w/p and the multies...structure could have been better also

hoops: i was really feeling your verse it was all around hott...i think you edged this battle out with your structure w/p multies and vocab....very good topical piece...you stayed on topic for the most part and fell off only a couple times you didnt have as much imagery as trase but your multies and vocab made up for that

i think that hoops edged this battle out with his vocab multies and w/p i think if trase would have used more of those he would have won very good battle

vote: hoops

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