Young Dez
structure wasnt to good...ur lines seemed like they were just goin everywhere...flow fell off cause of ur structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

whitegold
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure wasnt very good...ur lines weaved in and out of bein considered stretched though...flow fell off cause of the structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a few metas...neither had good personals...neither had a good structure....neither had a good flow...Young Dez more, and better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Young Dez gets my vote...

VOTE - YOUNG DEZ

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