ok pretty wack battle.....Da truth......you had one punch in whole verse an that was the beaver line an even that was weak, you had a few metas but nothing special, structure was bad, an flow was ok at best not much else to say

Punches: 5/10
Personals: 2/10
Metas: 3/10
Flow: 4/10
Structure: 2/10
Overall: 16/50

Original...not much better only difference is you had 2 ok punches, your opener was tight plus for that, an closer was ok not great but good, your opener won the battle for you in my opinion, your flow was shaky, structure just as bad as his, metas were ok, still a weak verse though

Punches: 6/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 5/10
Flow: 4/10
Structure: 4/10
Overall: 22/50

Both need to elevate but ultimately original won cuz of 2 mediore punches
Vote: Original

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