DaTruth29
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its gay...structure was wack...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was alright, some of it was good, some wasnt...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Orijinal
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...everyone who reads it will know when ur lines end...structure was pretty wack...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a lil cause of the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had good personals...Orijinal had more, and better metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Orijinal gets my vote...

VOTE - ORIJINAL