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IP:
young_bleek
what the fuck was that?...write ur lines down the page not in fuckin paragraphs...flow fell off cause ur structure was so wack...no metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
GEE
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas....wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that..GEE gets my vote...
VOTE - GEE
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