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Old 07-10-04, 02:52 AM   #6
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From: Crip City
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this was pretty onesided and i really think lethal took this one easily

Its my first battle in- im comin around
when this cat spit next- im layin em down
man you can put your self in a verse saying im new!!
you dont want see a nigga- im spittin tha truth
if you ask me who's crazy- I'll say it aint you
lol...decent personal
watch and believe- ill spit some names
ya crew gonna be like "oh this niggas insane"
naw not really feelin that
if you notice my name- they say imma killlah
Im going easy on you - ill just rock ya chin chilla
WTF makin up words... creativity ..lol
It aint nothing to me to spit some line
^^^not a good closer at all

lethal
like wen I take ecstasy- lookin at this bitch next-to-me
He just the one next-to-be- broken in half non-flex-ably
decent opener
It’s like the war/fight music- released in the air and let it breath
Like a fag who neva knew it- blood that neva tries to leave
decent punchlines but seen you do alot better
I’m a gun this lil bitch down- till there’s actually nothin to kill *
Discover you’re a clown- ya head is empty so I’ma start to drill
not really feelin that line
Up to my seventh line- and I’m already merkin this faggot
Like the age of time- this fag created a pussy habit
okay decent but not feelin the second line
We’re just seven years apart- and your still not above-me
Like a broken heart- ya still screamin no one wants to hug-me
lol...funny ..

structure:tie
punchlines:LL
multies:LL
personals:LL
enjoy reading :LL

overall vote:LL
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