exogenious
structure was ok...some of ur lines were mad short though...flow fell off a little...u had no good metas...wordplay was alright...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GEE
dont put the "" around ur words or the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had decent wordplay...neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GEE gets my vote...

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...