Bodo, U got skillz, Ur structure and flow can Use work tho. I was feelin Ur punchess kid, Ur word play wasnt to good but U was str8 in this. U used comical shit that'll keep U this battle even against a vet. If ur too seriouse, U'll loose to the nigga wit no skillz but funnier punchline. Keep it up, dont make Ur filler lines so simple tho.

Cosh.
to tell the truth, I didnt even read Ur entire verse, U should really elivate kid, no beef or nothing but Ur opponent in this battle was a few stepps highr than U. U feed off his verse and still did'nt come up wit a decent punch, plus U used the casket thing twice I think, feeding could some times count against U if U leave Ur whole verse Up to it. It'll make it look like ur opponent is so much more creative that U had to bite his shit just to stand a chance. Learn from this battle. No beef kid. U did ok.

Flow, B
Structure, B
Punches, B
Metaphores, B
Overall ryme style, B

V/ Bodo Bunce

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..