Originally Posted by Malefic

Ori
I got myself into battlin’ a dude that’s name of a lower-class of Gucci fabric/
His rhymes is fake like Chinatown sellin ‘Louis Vuitton’ bags made in plastic/
loui isn't low-class gucci.plastic bags? NO 2/10
This guy tellin me if I’m ready, but I’m ready to kill this dude in a instant/
If I live 200 miles away from him, I don’t care I’ll kill him mentally in a distance/
personal. weak punch. 4/10
In my hips I’m bring the whole 9 from glocks, mags and hot oozies/
This guy brings his whole designer shit from burberry to fake louis’s/
oozie's...lousi's NO. 2/10
This guy wanna battle, but I don’t know maybe he’s tryin sell bags to me too/
One dolla! One dolla! he says.. Rappers of Designer Brands is his new rap crew/
your still on the bag's.....1/10
He names himself after a designer handbag, thinkin’ he a fashion individual/
Keep this in mind, stick to bootleggin’, I’ll stick to bein’ ‘Orijinal’/
STILL.....1/10
No offense. But all you did was hit on one obviouse personal the whole battle. Line after Line. I mean, use it once. maybe. But move on. An hit wit something less-obviouse. No hate. Just tryna help.
10/50

Loui
I'm calm but I don't know about orijinal cuz I got my gat to his frame
I've done destructive shit that'll spin the fitted on this niggas brain
Ok punch. Lak'd Flo. 5/10
Why aint your kind rare, bitches a reason I keep various lead
Damn its the same flicks, same production leavin Orijinal niggas in the ER dead
didn't like this one at all. word'd weird. 2/10
have this nigga in medical condition man your flows need serious attention
"Thats Orijinal!" I find your rhymes need devine intervention
Ok punch. personal. kinda-not really 4/10
Y U step in2 the flames without a fire proof vest is the question
Orijinal against his own master scorched...damn I taught the wrong lesson...
pretty creative. no spark. but not bad. 5/10
You kept it simple. You had plenty of punches. Which is good. Only help I can hand is that you need to spice up your verse wit sum clever use' of personal's and wordplay. Have that an you'll have alot of win's.
16/40

Vote/Louis

Please hit up the battles in my sig wit honest vote's. thanks.