this whole thing was tight:
JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-
sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-
u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)
dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)
after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)
^i got all ya jokes and ya had nice punches Marv.. i like the personal wit' king solo lol...
and it was nice flow to it in my opinion... oh yeah and nice structure not too long very reasonable...
gotta ass whoopin:
dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
^ i undastood ya jokes they were funny but ya punches coulda been harder and ya structure be havin' spontaneous changes makin' it hard to follow up... and the two lines over was minor but that can piss sum1 off if they wanted to keep flowin'... respect the rules, nigga... don't stretch 'em and you had an hour to drop...
*Both did good drops but... uhhmmm
**overall vote: marvolous got this fa sho...**
drop votes on the battles in my sig...

keep blazin'...