Joval8
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was pretty good...flow fell off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

GEE
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was good...flow was on target...no metas....wordplay was good....some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Joval8 had more metas...neither had good personals...GEE had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GEE gets my vote...

VOTE - GEE