dawgfather_13
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was wack...flow fell off cause of ur structure wackness...u had a few metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

XxjimmywhitexX
dont number ur lines holmes...thats newbish...structure wasnt good...all of ur lines were stretched....flow fell off cause of the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...ok personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...XxjimmywhitexX had more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and more personals...so basing off of that XxjimmywhitexX gets my vote...

VOTE - XXJIMMYWHITEXX

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...