Mad Dog
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty simple...some of ur punches connected...a few good personals...

Kryogenix
structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was nice...most of ur punches connected...personals were good...

Overall
both had a few metas...Kryogenix had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Kryogenix gets my vote...

VOTE - KRYOGENIX

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...