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Old 07-10-04, 04:35 PM   #3
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Your verse was really choppy you really got off topic.. you were basically talkin about how hard it is to be black... and not anger...your emotion's were iight but shadow.. had alot better...mutlies okay...flow was decent but ive seen you do alot better...your structure was alittle off a times and if could have been better if the lines were very streteched/...overall it was a good topical but ive seen you do alot better and i really think that shadow took this one

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nice topical... you took this topical easily you stayed on topic... you had some nice flow... good emotion's and nice ... imagery.... you really had some nice structure i liked the way you put it in the middle and .. your verse was never off topic... so just for that you won..

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