VA
your strucutre was meessed up makiing ur verse hard to read..
your lines were way to stretched and that ruined your whole..flow
you had good emotion..but terrible strucutre and flow
overall 6/10

rated..
your emotion was great.. itm was better than va's .. you
had good strucutre making your verse really easier to
read..and everything..you won becuz you had better flow
strucutre emotion and a good storyline:
my vote rated