tripe n wasn't taking about anger if you ask me his was more about hate which leads to anger. however the flow and style was very nice and i do admitt that you got really into it. um some of the time it sounded like you were mad that you were black but i probably misread. i liked the complexity of it and the vocab was right except for a couple (can't get em all). lines that i really liked were the opener and closer you started off strong and end strong but sometimes in the middle you were weak. big up.

when i started reading it i thought that "anger" was going to be said in every line, lol. one thing that you have to change (in my opinion) is that style i don't like it centered. however, the flow good, and the vocab (i think) was all correct. you were lacking in the complexity this time. you get deep in all these topic battles man and you good. i liked that you stayed focused and was always about the anger. the lines seemed strong the whole time and you had more metaphor that i could tell. good job and my vote is for you.

vote: shadow

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