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Old 07-10-04, 06:10 PM   #14
Malefic
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Good battle first off.

Illiance
Nice punches. Great metiphores' along witta few good personal's.
Overall you had a pretty nice verse. Not much to improve on really.
Just keep up the ahrd punches.
Ameen
Also. Nice drop. Not a big fan of Cap'in your punches. We get the point. Your punches were OK. The one thing I noticed is your Metiphores. They were good. However they seeme'd a little bit forced at time. Good originalty just work on making things flo a little better into each other. Again, good Job.
This was a close on but...
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