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Old 07-10-04, 08:37 PM   #14
Magic5
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SYLEM
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Black Pantha
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off cause of the stretchnes...no metas...wordplay was simple, and most of it was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...SYLEM had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...SYLEM gets my vote...

VOTE - SYLEM

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...