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Old 07-10-04, 08:41 PM   #10
Magic5
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Joval8
structure is wack...over half of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness...no good metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

RASCAL
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
RASCAL had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...ima say RASCAL tore Joval8 a new asshole without usin lube.

VOTE - RASCAL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...