decent topical battle

L.E: i would have to say the thing that stood out the most in your verse was the imagery it started off about the characters and their surroundings and the happenings around them i enjoyed that...and then it escalated to a vision of the ring and you ran with the topic and i liked your approach a couple things could have been better : vocab and wordplay everything else was pretty solid and a very well written piece for a topic like this

poetic justice:

i felt your verse also i dont think the imagery was as good but the multies and wordplay were definaetly better...vocab was a lil better you came more complex but i didnt feel you stayed on topic as well as L.E did....you came from a different angle and point of view for this topic so it was hard to judge...i think your imagery could have been better and your structure...solid piece though

breakdown:

Consistency : limited edition
Flow : limited edition
Structure : limited edition
Wordplay : poetic justice
Multies: poetic justice
Imagery : limited edition
Vocabulary : poetic justice
Which topic i enjoyed more : poetic justice
Who staye on topic better : limited edition

vote: limited edition

Good topical battle tough decision but i think Limited Edition edged this one out because his imagery was slightly better

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