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Old 07-10-04, 10:32 PM   #1
Ca'lam
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aight hmm..

Original.. ya flow was aight.. had some decent punches in there.. i would like to see you focus on ya flow tho.. it wasent the best, but it worked i guess.. lines were a little streched.. structure was aight <-- streching didnt help it...


vitton:flow was good.. but you lacked hard hittin punches.. you had a name play, and gunplay.. but it didnt hit hard foreal at all..

i would say orijinal won this dueto his punches..
v/orig

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^jot up that battle with a Honest vote.. thanks
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