triple n i think dis punks crazee,actin like i wont pull da tool and dump 80-
said u dont care about rb but da "net stay on ya dome" like a "lunch lady"-

get ya money up,hussle marry pimpin,cuzz jay everybody glad he spittin-
dis n real immature he'll "neva grow up" he saught of like "maggie simpson"-

those wear fairly weak punchlines with weak newbish structure
good wordplay though..7/10

he gotta write ryhmes 4 me no talent dis fagget cant think of da head-
wanna fight on aol all dis "spider man" nigga wanna do is "swing on da web"-

fukkin with jay dunn dat cannon a waste,cops a find ya fam in dem lake's-
u real homo look at ya "avatar" u really wish u was on top of "canibus face"-

i been da sickest on here 4 a while now and all da bully's cant budge me-
ya crew cant say im week,by da way they rap da "jury" cant "judge" me-

the ending was tight...rest was fairly weak.. your wordplay on those wuz weak
ur rhymes werent making much sense overall verse 15/10
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tripleN
U drop a hot verse ha!!, I got a better chance of seeing hailey's comet
But ya verse is entertaining, I always liked reading marvel comics
I see a lot of bullshit in the weak ass rhymes that you write
U must have cancer cuz dats the only way u "da sickest on the site"
This'll be over quick, cuz you 19 yrs old an still have no kinda wit
better strucutre and becuz of ya strucutre better flow
the first line was nice!!
Eating too many chilli peppers is the only way ya ass gon drop hot shit
U pose to have a marvolous J but in the post all u shoot is bricks
Ya punches are always close, but u ruin more prospects than NY knicks
Ya wack post skills always have ya verse comin up shorter than infant pricks
Even if u were a "NBA hall of famer" u still wouldn't be a "Hardwood Classic"
^^ fairly weak ender but good punches and solid flow won you the battle...

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