killah :

Its my first battle in- im comin around
when this cat spit next- im layin em down
^^basic and filler 3/10
you dont want see a nigga- im spittin tha truth
if you ask me who's crazy- I'll say it aint you
^^weak 2/10
watch and believe- ill spit some names
ya crew gonna be like "oh this niggas insane"
^^more filler 2/10
if you notice my name- they say imma killlah
Im going easy on you - ill just rock ya chin chilla
^^dammit stop usin so much filler 1/10
It aint nothing to me to spit some line
so watch ya mouth down and take ya time
^^decent 4/10

overall : 12/50 (24%)

L.L :

Like wen I take ecstasy- lookin at this bitch next-to-me
He just the one next-to-be- broken in half non-flex-ably
^^some filler in 1st line but good multies 7/10
It’s like the war/fight music- released in the air and let it breath
Like a fag who neva knew it- blood that neva tries to leave
^^filler 2/10
I’m a gun this lil bitch down- till there’s actually nothin to kill *
Discover you’re a clown- ya head is empty so I’ma start to drill
^^decent punch good personal 7/10
Up to my seventh line- and I’m already merkin this faggot
Like the age of time- this fag created a pussy habit
^^decent punch basic 5/10
We’re just seven years apart- and your still not above-me
Like a broken heart- ya still screamin no one wants to hug-me
^^lol funny good closer 8/10

overall : 29/50 (58%)

vote: L.L his verse was obviously better he had some decent punched good structure and used a decent personal good verse...killah elevate in all areas start talking about your opponent and less about yourself

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