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Old 07-10-04, 11:05 PM   #26
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
GOOD OPENER..NICE PUNCHLINE..8/10
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
HAH..NICE..GOOD..BUT DONT TRY TO BRAG URSELF..7/10
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
GOOD..GOOD..YOUR FIRST LINE YOUR FLOW WAS ILL..GOOD 8/10
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
LMAO..GOOD PERSONAL..YOUR FLOW WAS ILL ONCE AGAIN 8/10
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
GOOD CLOSER..A "DEEP" ENDER...GOOD. 8/10

AVERAGED: 7.8

Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
SHIT DIDNT RHYME..SO IT LOSES MAD POINTS..5/10
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
AIGHT PUNCHLINE..WASNT GREAT..6/10
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
EHH...KINNA WHACK..DIDNT LIKE 6/10
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
ONCE AGAIN..DIDNT RHYME..I DUNNO IF IS JUSS ME BUT IS NOT RHYMIN..5/10

AVERAGED: 4.5

VOTE--MIXTAPE
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