Cass,You had a good flow n shit, but it was a little too much self glorification in your verse, and no hot punchlines dissing QBsmasher, you know what i'm sayin.. Your stucture was okay, no meta's, oh yea, "the sun rays thing", but it was self glorication.
QBsmasher basically brung more meta's and some multies, better stucture, good flow, better opener.. I have no give this one to QBsmasher Cuz...